2006-07-06 [TheRogue]: very good start Savien.. You are definately on the right track with your stuff.. tighten these up a little more so i can see where you are going with them. :) 

2006-07-06 [TheRogue]: Panel 1. Make sure not to 'cram' too much into the boundaries of the border.. it's not bad at all what you have but think outside the box, even draw past the panel as if you were taking a photo of a certain space.

2006-07-06 [TheRogue]: Panel 2. Not totally sure what is going on, other than a big giant toothy monster that seemed to be camoflaged comes out of hiding to go after a shark.. i like the angle on this one.. tighten it up some more so i can see where you are going. :D

2006-07-06 [TheRogue]: Panel 3. Not bad at all.. The angle of the box is good, play around with angles and.. even something i do.. i pretend i'm the person and sneak up on the 'treasure' and pay attention to what your posture is.. it might help with a little more realism. :D

2006-07-06 [Savien]: Excellent feedback. Thanks. As for panel 1, when I start to finalize the sketchwork, it should be a bit mor obvious what's going on in the panel. Things are drawn really light, and seem to really run together, but I really feel the best about that one. It's gonna be very busy, but I think it will work. *crosses fingers*

2006-07-06 [Savien]: Panel 2, did not scan as well as I'd have liked, but it is a huge toothy monster, rising from the deep. And it's supposed to be a whale, which will be a bit more obvious when the drawing is finished. I'm grappling with wether to try to include a reef, or some rocks to conceal more of the monster. Suggestions?

2006-07-06 [Savien]: Panel 3 is the shakiest, and I was leaning towards doing something different with the treasure, and adding some sort of background.

2006-07-06 [Savien]: Thanks again. i really appreciate it. :)

2006-07-06 [Savien]: I'll try to tighten up the lines, and add some bigger scans later.

2006-07-07 [TheRogue]: Just a little suggestives here. Make sure that the objects in place, have a place to be. It is sometimes helpful to develop a room or area layout (topographical) to keep everything in place when you put people into it. The ? is for where is the rope going from there? It extends behind the tattooed man's head, but goes nowhere after that. Just some small suggestions on change.. the man reading the map should be looking down towards the map more, the elf with the bundle's hand was off a little and his head might be looking up and over more, instead of side glancing.Pointing man needed more neck (still does i left a little off) Overall I like the diversity of the 

2006-07-07 [TheRogue]: people you have going on in the pic.. just a few tweaks here and there before the next evolution. :)

2006-07-08 [Savien]: Very helpful. I'm likin' this place already.

2006-07-19 [Savien]: Workin' on a final version of the dock scene, but took an aside, and started on some heads. I'm just gonna post those. since I have 'em.

2006-07-19 [Savien]: Oh, and I totally hadn't seen the orc head on a stick Travs drew, until after i drew these.  :/  *end disclaimer*

2006-07-31 [travs the bean]: well my good friend are you ready to begin-